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[twins]

So, here we decided to put our works;-);-) We would be glad to get your comments!

Okay, at first we want to show you some our poems in English, but you know. it s*cks!

Nadia's:
Confessions of A Virgin Soul

You looked so sexy,
Your eyes were bright
I was so inspired,
By your desire
You took me in your arms,
You touched my face
I was like in your skies
Like lived some days
You knew I was yours
Your body felt,
Controlled all my gusts
To reach itself
We were together
In dreams of our life,
And death between us
Could not survive
Like poison your lips
Were strong and brave
Gave me their first
And started again
We lived in love web
It was like the prize
Which I want to get,
When I miss sunrise
I woke up so early,
But you were not there
I understood really
That I was in hell
You vanished from my life
You left me alone
Repeat it one more time
That you broke my soul...

Find me, catch me
Today I cry, I cry, I cry
See you, call you
I wanna try, I try, I try
Break off my scream
And every people think I’m OK
Through out my broken dream,
Support myself to be on new way
My body’s nasty, my body’s dirty
You look above at me, in my eyes
I wanna taste it, I wanna break it
I wanna start new page of my life
I wanna forget it,
I wanna bury deep
Inside my soul, inside my empty world
You looked all me tears,
You read all my fears
And all confessions of A Virgin Soul....


Take you by storm

Run away from my home
Run through all your guard
I will take you by storm
Follow call of my heart

When all leave us alone
We will lock in your room
I will take you by storm
When we hide light of moon

“Don’t disturb” on your door
and the key’s under bed
I will take you by storm
In spite of wail of your friend

Stop up ringing of phone
And they cry: “Hold the line!”
I will take you by storm
And tonight you’ll be mine!!!
I will take you by storm
And tonight you’ll be mine!!!

Kate's:
To run away

I am brave than someday,
but I’m still upset.
Nothing could kill me,
and he left my head.
Anyway he couldn’t
Break my life at all.
Try to look much stronger,
but I know I fall.

I want to run away
through dark to another day.
I don’t want to feel this pain,
so I want to run away.
I want to run away
‘cause I have no voice to pray
and try to forget his name,
so I want to run away.

I seem to be so lucky,
they see my smiling face.
Nobody know that I want
to throw it all and race.
I’m alone in this cage,
shadows are on the wall.
Try to look like winner,
but I know I fall.

I try to forget

I try to forget your words
You'te better escape my mind
alone on the life's crossroads
I stay so deaf and blind
I try to forget your eyes
that drove me crazy so long
you really were very wise
and knew what was right or wrong
I try to forget the lie
You've told me and I believe
You see I am still alive
in spite of it's hard to live
I try to forget your voice
that I always wanted to hear
You spoke, but I did the choice
I leave you alone, my dear
I try to forget your love
it was only foolish game
And now I am from above
but miss you and love all the same.

[battybarb]

i love it,really good,well done

[Deb]

Sorry only just saw this :oops:

Very cool and very well written for two non English speaking people :thumbsup:

[Anji]

Very good twins :-)

I particuarly like 'take you by storm' and 'i try to forget'

Very deep, well done :-D

[twins]

Thank you, guys!!!

[Barshy]

Well done!! ;-)

[bloodflowerz]

Great work Twins!